It was dawn, and the sun was breathing
clouds of pink, orange, and white.
And some invisible man, from so very high up
was stitching new colours into the sky,
closing them tight, by spindle and thread
so all the Martians and systems and constellations
would never be seen again.
At least for a little while.
Knees crossed, coat buttoned, coffee mug steaming
I read the paper out loud, so all of the mountains
and trees
and you
could hear the news,
November seventeenth, 1968.
And I told you all about the car crash
by Sycamore Bridge.
You asked about the grand oak tree, and the pond
and the quiet, wrinkled lady who used to feed the ducks.
We talked about them for a while.
And you brought out your photographs of the park,
so vivid and green, with trout rising all around
the rainbow gasoline circles and bits of bread.
It was raining so hard that afternoon, but we walked anyway
with matching raincoats, and boots,
and smiles.
I took a picture of you and the duck lady,
who gave you a bit of rye to feed the birds.
Sometime, Im going to read you an article
that ends with
It was all just a dream. Theyre okay,
really.
And sometime, well move from this old, rickety home
right into the city. Well get our own stove,
and well never get stuck in the rain again
with a whole lot of bread and no feathers in sight.
But the view out here
is so empty, and silent,
and beautiful.














Devious Comments
if this doesn't have sentimental value, then my writing must seem like it's made mindlessly and heartlessly.
really good writing, Alice.
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Watch the green summer trees blur by in the rear view
The windows rolled down, I saw you singing, couldn't hear you
I have that scene memorized so clearly, but the years flew
I'm jumping like I'm grabbing for the stars, like the deers do
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Watch the green summer trees blur by in the rear view
The windows rolled down, I saw you singing, couldn't hear you
I have that scene memorized so clearly, but the years flew
I'm jumping like I'm grabbing for the stars, like the deers do
"with a whole lot of bread and no feathers in sight" I'm pretty sure that's my favorite line. Everything about it, the flow, the words, the rhythm--it's great.
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"...but 400 years later, an idea can still change the world."
-V for Vendetta
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I got a jar of dirt, I got a jar of dirt, I got a jar of dirt and guess whats inside it!
Have a good sniff around my sisters and cousins page and artworks they are really good.
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The world used to be a bigger place.
The world's still the same - there's just less in it.
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I got a jar of dirt, I got a jar of dirt, I got a jar of dirt and guess whats inside it!
Have a good sniff around my sisters and cousins page and artworks they are really good.
[link]
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